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Unless they cannot be expressed in one or two words, use words for numbers that precede a compound modifier that includes another number.

She sold twenty 35-millimeter cameras in one day.

The prescription called for 120 25-milligram doses.

Note: You may use a combination of words and numerals for very large numbers.

6-8 million

2 billion to 2.9 billion

7 trillion

(From Write for Business, page 212, and Proofreader's Guide PDF, page 14)

"What should you say on the phone: 'It is me' or 'It is I?' Maybe you should just hang up the phone and send a fax."

- Laurie E. Rozakis, The Complete Idiot's Guide to Grammar and Style

You can find top ten (or 20) lists covering just about anything: Top business schools, top crime novels, top angry comedians, most unusual pets,…even the most unusual Japanese chewing gums. Very funny. There are entire books devoted to lists; that's how popular they are. Some of these lists inform us (safest cars); others entertain us (just tune in to the David Letterman Show).

I'm not sure why we're so attracted to lists. Do we have a deep-seated need to rank things or an innate desire to have information classified and pre-packaged? Certainly all of our technological gadgetry lends itself to classifying and ranking.

Anyway…if you Google "most common errors in writing," you will (surprise, surprise) have instant access to any number of helpful lists. There are general-usage lists as well as more specific lists, such as one devoted exclusively to business letters and another devoted to accountants and their writing.

One of the lists that I find most useful was compiled by Andrea A. Lunsford and Robert J. Connors. They analyzed the errors in 3,000 college-level papers as marked by college instructors, and compiled their list according to the frequency that certain errors appeared. Here are the first five errors that they identify:

1. No comma after a longer introductory element.

   With a devil-may-care attitude and a bowl of chips Rico marched into his man cave to watch another Detroit Lions' loss.
   
   (A comma is needed after the long introductory prepositional phrase: With a devil-may-care attitude and a bowl of chips, Rico…)

2. Vague pronoun reference.

   While Samantha talked with Yvonne, she offered advice about dealing with the Neanderthals in shipping.
   
   (As stated, it is unclear who is offering the advice. She should be replaced by Yvonne or Samantha, depending on who is the advice giver. Example: While talking with Yvonnne, Samantha offered advice…)

3. No comma in a compound sentence.

   Mr. Peabody said he was truly humbled about his promotion yet he spent more than 10 minutes blathering about it.
   
   (A comma is needed before the coordinating conjunction yet.)

4. Using the wrong word.

   Let their be no mistake about the sale's figures. Their awful.
   
   (The first their should be there; the second one should be they're.)

5. No comma in a nonrestrictive element.

   J.J.'s Sandwich Shop which makes the best hard rolls ever now has delivery service.
   
   (The clause which makes the best hard rolls ever should be set off by commas because it offers unnecessary information.)

Another useful list compiled by Maxine Hairston focuses on errors as viewed by business people. The top errors are the ones that bothered the participants the most. Scroll down to "The Non-Educators View of Grammatical Errors." Here are the first five errors that Hairston identifies:

1. Nonstandard verb forms

   Anxious Inc. has went through two takeovers in the past three years.
   
   (The correct verb form is has gone.)

2. Lack of subject-verb agreement

   Neither Boris nor Bruno are attending the wellness fair.
   
   (Singular subjects joined by nor take a singular verb - in this case, Neither Boris nor Bruno is…)

3. Double negatives

   After carefully reviewing the new Web designs, we don't think none of them are cutting edge.
   
   (Any should replace none to avoid the double negative.)

4. Objective pronoun as subject

   April and me will edit the new employee's manual.
   
   (Use the nominative pronoun I in the subject position: April and I will edit…)

5. Sentence fragments

   HM Investments offers a great opportunity. If you're into high-risk, no-reward employment.
   
   (The fragment if you're into high-risk, no-reward employment should be connected to the sentence that comes before it: …great opportunity if you're…)

Note: As you might guess, incorrect spelling is, far and away, the most frequent and obvious error and, thus, not included in either study.

Do you use a list as a guide when checking your business writing for errors? If so, how closely does it match one or the other of these? Your business writing handbook (if you use one) may provide an editing checklist based on an error analysis. For example, the editing guide on pages 156-157 in Write for Business is based on the Lunsford and Conner study.

Final Thought: According to grammar authority Constance Weaver, if you try to edit without using a top-ten (20) list, you may find yourself "falling into a big black hole of errors," not really knowing what to look for once you get past checking for spelling, capitalization, and end punctuation. If you need more convincing, check online for a list of the most compelling reasons to use a top-ten errors' list. I'd put your odds at finding one at one in twenty.

- Dave Kemper

How correct should you be in your business writing? The safe answer, of course, is perfectly correct, especially if you are of a certain age, and attended Catholic grade schools. Correctness, according to most nuns, was next to godliness. But times have changed, as have Catholic schools (where have all the nuns gone?) - and so has the way we communicate.

We speak face to face, we text message, we tweet, we e-mail, we blog, we write letters, we write reports.… If you put the forms of communication on a continuum, the honest answer to the opening question might be, "That depends on the form."

You can be a little ungrammatical when your communication is more spontaneous than deliberate, more informal than formal; but as you move up the scale, correctness becomes more of an issue.

Do we expect error-free conversations in text messages? Of course not. What would constitute an error when texting, anyway? How about in e-mail? An error here or there in a message to a colleague shouldn't be cause for concern, whereas errors in an e-mail to a client or customer should be. How about a departmental memo? By all means, take care whenever your writing is exposed to multiple readers.

But why this concern about correctness in the first place? Does it really matter if you misplace an apostrophe or use to in one sentence when you really mean too. Not if you ask me. But you'd get a different answer from the "correctness Nazis" out there, individuals who thinks that the world begins and ends with perfect punctuation and grammar.

Some people say that it's a matter of clarity - a missing or misplaced comma can change the meaning of a sentence, or a shift in verb tense may cause serious confusion. There are plenty of books that address slip ups like these. Eats, Shoots and Leaves is one. This #1 New York Times bestseller has the following subtitle: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation.

The title, of course, shows how a misplaced comma can completely skew an idea. It should read "Eats Shoots and Leaves," describing an animal's eating habits. But if you put this idea within the context of a complete text, the mistake becomes far less an issue. We would get the message. Am I condoning this error? No, I'm just saying that these things happen, and they seldom deprive the reader of following a writer's line of thinking.

Other people say that the issue is a matter of respect - that providing clear, accurate copy shows that you truly value the reader's time and interest. It's hard to dispute this argument. But no one in his or her right mind would send out an important letter or share a quarterly report without making sure that the copy is clear and correct, even if that means having a professional copyeditor check the writing for errors. (Remember the communication continuum.)

The best argument in my mind is completely self-serving. You want your letters and reports to be clean because it makes you look good. Image may not be everything in the business world, but it's right up there. Making a good impression in your writing may help you secure a job, and later, help you advance your career. For this reason alone, pay attention to correctness.

Final Thoughts
There is a time and place for everything, including checking for errors, and that time is late in the development of a piece of writing. Focus on your ideas first. Once you're satisfied that you have something worthwhile to say, then carefully attend to the accuracy of your writing. It makes no sense to do otherwise.

"We will sell no wine before its time" was once a successful slogan in the wine industry. Turn that a bit - "I will not check my writing for errors before it's time" - and the slogan will serve you well as an editing reminder.

- Dave Kemper

Using basic punctuation is like swimming or riding a bike: once you learn how, you never forget. Take periods and question marks, for example. You've internalized their uses so that placing them in your writing becomes automatic, much like kicking your legs when swimming.

But as you know, not all punctuation marks are created equal. Semicolons, colons, commas, dashes, parentheses - these marks can be confusing. For some (like the semicolon), it is because you rarely use them; for others (like the comma), it's because there are so many uses.

Of course, when you have questions about punctuation, you can refer to a business-writing handbook such as Write for Business or to an online grammar guide for rules and examples. What you might find equally helpful, however, are explanations such as the entertaining ones Patricia T. O'Conner provides in Woe is I (Riverhead Books, New York). She approaches punctuation as road markers, if you will, that direct traffic so readers don't get lost along a stretch of writing.

Here are her opening explanations for each mark; read and enjoy. (The examples are mine.)

• The period is the red light at the end of a sentence.

Late afternoon meetings stink.

• "Don't take commas for granted. They're like yellow traffic lights. If you ignore one, you could be in for a bumpy ride."

Oscar, tell me how you stay awake.

• "If a comma is a yellow light and a period is a red light, the semicolon is a flashing red - one of these lights you drive through after a brief pause."

By 4:15, I almost always feel the weary dismals coming on; a cup of forty weight is the only remedy.

• "But remember that a colon is an abrupt stop, almost like a period. Use one only if you want your sentences to brake completely."

For productive meetings, follow these guidelines: schedule them for the morning, put a time limit on discussions, and offer frequent flyer miles for participation.

• "The question mark is the raised eyebrow at the end of a sentence."

Who will head the doughnut committee?

• "The exclamation mark is like the horn on your car - use it only when you have to."

Yes! Another pie chart!

• For parentheses: "Once in awhile you may need an aside, a gentle interruption to tuck information into a sentence or between sentences."

He sat next to me and proceeded to describe (in graphic detail) his bout with the flu.

• "We could do with fewer dashes. In fact, the dash is probably even more overused these days than the exclamation point - and I admit to being an offender myself."

She stated the words I hate to hear - next quarter's quotas.

O'Conner's engaging text also covers all aspects of grammar, from forming possessives to subject-verb agreement, from using pronouns to understanding commonly mixed pairs of words. It deserves a space on your desk, next to a dictionary and writing handbook.

Here are three other punctuation and grammar guides to consider, all written with a pleasing mix of irreverence, panache, and insight:

1. The New Well-Tempered Sentence (Ticknor & Fields) by Karen Elizabeth Gordon
2. Eats, Shoots and Leaves (Gotham Books) by Lynne Truss
3. Lapsing into a Comma (Contemporary Books) by Bill Walsh

Final Thoughts: Columnist Russell Baker offers another helpful explanation of punctuation. He says it "plays the role of body language. It helps readers hear you the way you want to be heard."

No matter what metaphor works for you, just remember that punctuation is there to serve rather than befuddle you.

- Dave Kemper

Once upon a time, in the days of typewriters, a dash was a dash and a hyphen was a hyphen, and they both knew their place. A simple tap of a key and a hyphen appeared to divide syllables; two taps of the same key made a dash to separate phrases or clauses.

With advances in desktop publishing, however, every personal computer now provides at least three different types of dash-related punctuation: the hyphen, the en dash, and the em dash. Here's a quick guide to these punctuation pretties.

The hyphen is still used to form compound words and to divide syllables, and your word processor may be set to do so automatically when needed (at the end of a line of text, for example).

The en dash, so called because it is the width of the typed "n," is used between numbers. It replaces the word "to," as in the sentence We drove 10-15 miles to get there. The en dash is also appropriately used as a minus sign before a number; however, if your program offers a separate minus sign, use it instead. Again, your word processor may automatically convert a hyphen to an en dash between numbers. If not, or if you need to use the en dash as a minus sign, check your program for an "Insert -> Symbol" function or similar command.

The em dash, which is the width of a letter "m," is used to set off an idea or added information. Here are examples of three common uses.

The point of a nature walk is simple - to experience nature. (Used for Emphasis)

My accountant - Susan Cowl - will have to look at the figures. (Used for Added information)

Fast, cheap, and good - in business, you can choose any two, but not all three. (Sets off an Introductory series)

The em dash can also be used to indicate interrupted speech, as in this example: Now it's time - finally - to introduce our next speakers, who together - excuse me? They aren't here? Remember that you will rarely encounter this particular use of the dash in formal business writing.

Most word processors will automatically create an em dash when you type two hyphens in a row. If not, use the "Insert -> Symbol" function instead.

A Word About Spacing
In general, do not insert a space before or after an en or em dash. However, it is common for some publishers to use a "space, en dash, space" sequence instead of an em dash. (UpWrite Press uses a "space, hyphen, space" sequence in online posts such as this one to avoid display problems in some RSS feeds.) Follow your own company guidelines in this regard.

You can learn more about dashes beginning on page 196 in Write for Business: A Compact Guide to Writing and Communicating in the Workplace, just one of the many helpful business writing materials from UpWrite Press.

- Joyce Lee

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